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Post by youdiedtooeasily » Mon Oct 06, 2014 02:53

Now that my internet is working again, I have come up with an idea. After Quack mentioned I should write a movie based off of the members of pf moving in together it haunted me that night and sparked a free writing frenzy resulting in this. I spent all of Friday night combining the ideas and consolidated them to a potential premise. I had to limit it to six members since it would be really difficult to include everyone but that's what sequels are for haha! Here is the synopsis, hope you enjoy.

pf - the movie

Set in the near future we see Youdied as he gets fired from his pizza restaurant job after flipping out on an unruly customer. He arrives home to discover his girlfriend, whom he was living with, is leaving him as well due to his lack of commitment and lack of financial stability. In a fit of depression and anger he logs into “pf” for the first time in a long while and creates a topic about giving up on life. Over the course of the night, he gets various responses from other forum members also down on their luck. Saladin, who just got laid off from his programming job and had a bad falling out with his friends, is also at the end of his wits and is fed up with life. Quack is the next to respond explaining how he is tired of being alone and wants to be around people he cares about after his ex abandoned him when he proposed. Quack then mentions he wouldn’t mind starting over in the states, since he currently resides in Canada, which peaks the interest of Saladin and Youdied. Frohman is next to jump on the bandwagon claiming he is sick of his life as well after not being able to find steady work after graduating from school and being out casted by his family. He wants an escape as well and they all agree upon that ideal.

A few days pass and “pf” is thriving again with the members speaking about their internal struggles and lack of effort about their lives. They are all in unison about not caring anymore. This is caught by the attention of the admin Ransom, who has been absent for quite some time, on the site. Ransom proclaims he will be traveling to the states in a week and sets up a video conference on Skype with the current members to discuss a possible meet up. After a very long ban, Mr. Smith logs into “pf”, and witnesses the commotion. Everyone is hesitant to reply to his post in the topic about the video conference at first. They start to sympathize with him after Smith reveals what’s been going on in his life during his ban. After his wife divorced him and left him with nothing, he claims he has nothing to live for and is desperate to be around people he cares about, hence why returning to “pf”. Youdied creates a poll to decide if Smith should be allowed to join in on the conference but Frohman states his case that this is a bad idea to the rest of the members. Quack votes yes but Saladin and Frohman disagree about the idea entirely, still not believing his story, and vote no on the poll leaving it 2-2. Ransom, being the deciding factor and understanding of everyone’s current struggles, says yes to Smith being allowed to attend, by winning the poll 3-2. Ransom admits he will need help with finances to be able to travel to a set destination for a meet up and Smith counters by offering to pay for everyone to visit him in California, since Saladin is already in the same state. Everyone is hesitant at first, reminded of Smiths nature, but all eventually agree to meet up in Cali since he offered to pay for travel expenses. The conference ends and we see each person packing up their belongings to meet up.

A week later the members arrive into LAX, one by one, and Smith and Saladin have agreed that they will pick the group up at the airport. Youdied and Quack are first to arrive and bump into each other at the baggage claim. They hug each other and two attractive girls walk by saying “wow what a cute couple” which causes both of them to chuckle. While waiting outside for Smith and Saladin to pick them up, Frohman comes out of the terminal and runs into Youdied and Quack outside and they greet each other. Frohman explains how he had sex with a flight attendant during his flight and goes into graphic detail about it. A WASPy family, with small children, is standing right behind him and scoff at his vulgar description but he replies “ayyyy” and laughs as they storm off angrily. The group chats a bit then is puzzled where Ransom is. The phrase “where the fuck is Ransom?” will be repeated throughout. Smith and Saladin show up and honk at the group. Quack and Youdied go into Smiths car and Frohman goes into Saladin’s car and they drive to Smiths house. After everyone is settled in, Smith announces his idea of having the group move in together at his house. Ransom appears out of a random room in the house and presents himself; it surprises everyone, even Smith. Smith pours everyone a glass of scotch as they sit at a dining room table and listen to Smiths pitch.

After all the years spent talking to each other on “pf” Smith encourages everyone to move into his house after his wife left him. He claims he is sorry for harassing and trolling everyone and thinks they should all be together since that’s all they have left is each other. Each person goes one by one explaining their frustrations and hardships and slams down their glass. Ransom presents Smith a document with potential house rules and Smith says he will review them and share them with everyone. Everyone else wants to chime in but Smith says it’s his house, his rules and only lets Ransom have input because he is the admin of “pf” still. This causes a little tension but Smith refills everyone’s glass and asks if they have a deal. Everyone pitches in their plan to find a job and an idea of how to sustain themselves but all agree this is the right thing to do. Ransom, caught up in the moment, decides he will move to the states and live with the group as well. Everyone cheers and takes a drink. Smith states the move-in date will be “six months from now” and everyone agrees.

Smith takes everyone out to a nice dinner the same night and everyone at the dining table discusses random topics and pokes fun at each other’s misfortunes. This causes Smith and Frohman to start getting a little more heated in their responses however, and they start going at it. The others are getting a little skeptical of the situation and Saladin interjects trying to calm them down. Smith fires back claiming “no one can tell me what to do!” and leaves the dining table abruptly. Youdied follows Smith and everyone remaining at table starts talking about rethinking this idea. Smith is outside smoking and Youdied confronts him and smokes with him. Smith says he’s sorry about causing a scene and it won’t happen again. He claims he still hasn’t gotten over the divorce and it causes him to get really upset easily. Youdied calms Smith down and Smith claims this will only work if he can be there for him when he gets upset and Youdied agrees. Smith proclaims he’s a changed man and left the old Smith behind him. Youdied comforts him some more and convinces him to go back inside. They go back inside and they all have an awkwardly quiet dinner. After a few moments Quack notices Ransom is missing and says “where the fuck is Ransom?” After scouring the restaurant with no luck the group heads back to Smiths place and they see Ransom waiting outside the house. Everyone asks him where he went the whole time and he replies he was “taking care of something” and won’t reveal anything else. Everyone shrugs and moves on inside. A montage of the group hanging over the course of a few days displays Frohman and Smith getting a long better, Ransom and Saladin become gaming rivals yet are having fun, and Youdied and Quack spend a lot of time at the beach. It cuts to the last day of the trip and everyone is standing outside the house with their bags. Smith and Ransom have come up with a “house rules” list and everyone agrees it’s fair and they all decide to move-in together in six months. Smith claims “pf” will now be our home after all. Everyone takes separate cabs back to LAX to head back to their prior destination to prepare for this new lifestyle.

It cuts to six months later and everyone arrives to the house in various moving trucks helping each other move in. Smith, seeing Ransoms belongings already set-up in one of the bedrooms, says “where the fuck is Ransom?” since he is not present in the house nor ever made an entrance. Frohman points out that Smith should be helping them move in, since he is standing observing, and causes another outburst. Youdied rushes in to stop the situation. They clam down but distance themselves inside the house. Youdied reminds Smith that he is here to help but states to Smith he needs to be supportive since everyone is struggling right now and needs help, not backlash, for making such a big life decision. Quack goes to a spare bedroom to unload his belongings but the door is locked. He asks Smith what the deal is and Smith calmly points him to a different spare room, stating that was his ex wife’s study room and he doesn’t want anyone to go in there. Smith mentions he has the key to the room but doesn’t want anyone to disturb it due to emotional ties with the divorce. Considering they are all in emotional torment, Quack respects his statement and chooses the last tiny room available. After everyone is settled in, Frohman and Saladin decide collectively to go out to check out the downtown area. Smith wants to go with them but Frohman gives him a dirty look and declines the invitation. Smith storms off to his room and slams the door. Later, Ransom bursts out of his room and grabs a fire extinguisher as Youdied and Quack are watching TV. They have a puzzled look as Ransom yells “I have it under control!” and runs back into his room and closes the door behind him. Youdied and Quack start discussing their exes and how they are both hopeless romantics. Quack asks Youdied if he ever thought about “joining the other team” but Youdied playfully dismisses that idea. Smith emerges from his room and joins in on the conversation. Ransom comes back out from his room and joins in as well, talking about various relationship elements. Smith shows all of them a picture of his ex wife and speaks about the divorce. Cut to Frohman and Saladin downtown, they talk about how unsure they are of Smith and think he is a ticking time bomb. Saladin tells Frohman to lay off his back and let everything sort itself out. Frohman agrees but states it will be difficult. They go to a dance club and let loose. Saladin, being dubbed “the dance mastah”, performs a solo dance in the middle of the crowd and even catching the attention of a couple girls, Saladin and Frohman hit off on the dance floor with the two girls. They take shots and dance around having a good time. Cut back to the house, Ransom announces he needs to go to bed early since he has a big day ahead of him tomorrow. Smith tells Youdied and Quack to keep the TV down and he is going to stream on Twitch the rest of the night.

Some time passes as Youdied and Quack make fun of the movie they are watching and Frohman and Saladin burst through the door pretty tipsy with the girls they met downtown. Frohman tosses the girl he was with down on the couch next to Youdied and Quack and starts making out with her passionately. Quack and Youdied stare for a minute then look at each other awkwardly then look away. Saladin escorts the girl he was with and they make out in the hallway. Smith comes out of his room, angrily, and wonders what all the commotion is about. He runs over to Frohman yelling but Youdied subdues him and brings Smith back to his room to calm him down. Quack goes to check on Ransom to apologize for the noise but notices Ransom is absent and says “where the fuck is Ransom?” A loud shriek comes from the hallway and Quack runs over to see what’s going on. The girl Saladin is with wanted to make out in the previously locked spare room but discover the room is unlocked this time. They enter the room cautiously and notice the room is full of pee jars, cum stained pictures of “pf” members, dismembered blowup dolls, and various women’s dirty panties. The girl freaks out and grabs her friend off of Frohman and they leave the house, which in turn, upsets Frohman. Frohman meets Quack and Saladin in the unlocked room and gasps. They close the door quietly and retreat to hold a private conference out in the backyard thinking this was all a huge mistake. They agree not to tell Smith about the room and choose to ignore the issue, hoping Smith will clean the room out now that they have arrived, since he is in such denial as it is. Smith emerges and questions the three of them but they all state the girls just needed to call it a night without mentioning their discovery. Youdied appears and looks upon Quack, Quack has a look of trauma on his face, and Youdied senses something is going on. Ransom walks through the front door and goes back into his room and asks what all happened while he was gone. Everyone looks at him like he was from another planet. Quack announces that they should all get to bed since they all have to start their new jobs tomorrow and everyone agrees.

Cut to the next day and Youdied returns from his job and is the first one to make it back to the house. He enters through the front door and is surprised to see a kangaroo standing in the living room. Youdied, confused and unsure of what to make of the situation, walks over to Ransoms room cautiously and notices he is not there. He mutters “where the fuck is Ransom?” and walks back into the living room trying to figure out the kangaroo situation. Smith comes home and is alarmed that there is a kangaroo in his living room and Ransom is nowhere to be found. He exclaims “where the fuck is Ransom!?” and they both try to accommodate with the marsupial. Frohman and Saladin return to the house from their jobs at the same time and are alarmed by the situation as well. Quack, shortly after, enters the house to examine everyone standing in the living room observing the kangaroo walking around the house. Ransom is still nowhere to be found. Youdied proposes the idea to name the kangaroo “James” and everyone agrees. Ransom shows up from the kitchen out of nowhere with a freshly baked pizza with eggs on it and states “dinner is ready, don’t worry about James.” Everyone else gives him a puzzled look but shrugs it off and goes in the dining room to have dinner. Everyone talks about their first day at work and ask Ransom what the deal with James is. Ransom explains that James is for protection since he fears an impending doom is approaching. Youdied tries to get Ransom to explain himself further but it isn’t successful. Ransom goes back to his room saying “a storm is coming” and James stands guard outside his bedroom door faithfully. Frohman and Saladin play videogames in the living room and talk shit to each other. Youdied pulls Quack aside and confronts him about the previous night. Quack admits they walked into the room of pee jars and other odd items and begs him not to tell Smith. Youdied doesn’t believe Quack and thinks he is just trying to stir up problems. Smith invites himself into the conversation but they both deny talking about anything important. Smith goes into his room and starts streaming again. Quack states when Smith goes to sleep he will grab Youdied and show him that the room is real. After the gaming session Quack informs Saladin and Frohman that Youdied doesn't believe the pee jar room is real and the three express that it is indeed real to Youdied. Youdied agrees to check it out later that evening, and if they are telling the truth, he will talk to Smith about it privately. Smith falls asleep at his desk and Quack grabs the others. They get to the pee jar room but it’s locked this time. A storm erupts outside causing heavy lightning and rain. Quack says they need a key to unlock the door and is persistent about it, explaining Smith mentioned he had the key inside his bedroom. Frohman and Saladin aren’t comfortable with going into Smiths room to look for it. Quack agrees with them and tells Youdied that if he wants to see the truth he will have to get the key himself. Youdied sighs and agrees to go look for the key in Smiths room.

As Youdied draws closer to Smiths room the storm increases as well. He enters the room to see Smith still sleeping at his desk. He sneakily looks through various boxes and under pieces of scattered clothing and finds nothing. As a last ditch effort he goes into Smiths bathroom. He checks the medicine cabinet first and notices a lot of sleeping pills, razor blades, and torn bits of duct tape inside and blows it off thinking it’s nothing. He peers into Smiths shower and sees a key in a soap dish as well as a picture of his ex wife with cum all over it on the shower floor. Youdied shakes his head at the picture and reaches for the key quietly. He grabs it and sneakily makes his exit, on the way out of the bathroom he steps on a Swiffer handle and it makes a cracking sound and Youdied pauses. Smith remains asleep and he continues forward back to the others. Youdied inserts the key and it unlocks the door. The pee jars and everything else remain exactly as they were before. Youdied is shocked and they all walk inside the room. They start scouring the room and are disgusted in what they see. In one corner of the room they notice a mini fridge and it reeks of an awful scent. The group turns to Youdied to be the one to open it, since he didn’t believe them about the room initially, and he agrees to open it. Quack stands by the doorway as a lookout in case Smith wakes up. Frohman and Saladin keep muttering how they knew this was going to be a bad idea. Youdied nervously opens the mini fridge door and almost vomits to what he witnesses. He signals the others to come over. They run over and gasp at their discovery. The head and ring finger of Smiths ex wife are inside the mini-fridge in a gruesome fashion. Quack and Youdied inform Frohman and Saladin that this indeed his ex wife’s body parts after seeing the picture Smith showed them the night before. Youdied slams the fridge door shut and they all run out of the room to warn Ransom of what they just found. To their surprise they run into Smith instead. Smith is inside Ransoms room wearing Tonys skinned face as a mask and is holding a sacrificial looking blade as he mutters “where the fuck is Ransom…” in a creepy tone. The power goes out after he says the line.

The group flees into the living room and Smith eerily pursues, the only lighting they can see is from the lightning bolts from outside illuminating the inside of the house. The group picks up various items to defend themselves, including a video game controller, a rolled up magazine, a lighter, and an empty beer bottle. Smith laughs manically and waves his blade around. He exclaims “I’ve been waiting fifteen years for this day to come! I will kill each one of you, piece by piece, and “pf” will be destroyed forever!” Frohman engages Smith first but Smith, with a seemingly unusual amount of strength, back hands him aside and he goes crashing into a wall, injured. Saladin and Quack look at each other and nod, making a roaring charge to Smith, but Smith backpedals and vanishes into the shadows, making them run into nothing and glance at each other confused. Smith suddenly reappears out of the darkness holding the blade to Youdieds neck. Youdied tries to talk Smith out of it but it’s of no use. Smith tells Saladin and Quack to stand down and accept their fate. They try to argue with Smith that this isn’t right, he needs to let go of the hatred and turn himself in. Smith laughs at their responses and starts slowly slicing one of Youdieds cheeks, right under his eye. Smith confidently states Youdied gets killed last and demands the other three needs to decide who dies first and pick an order to be executed. Youdied struggles to get out of Smiths grasp but can’t. Frohman slowly stands up and mutters “where the fuck is Ransom...” as he hobbles over to Quack and Saladin. The group of three try to talk Smith out of the whole ordeal but Smith insists they must die and “pf” will cease to exist. He starts running the blade down Youdieds other cheek forming “teardrops” of blood under his eyes. Youdied keeps trying to convince Smith this isn’t right. He tries to explain to Smith that he can be saved from his troubled past and everyone can just leave this situation and never speak of it again. Smith denies the request. He throws Youdied to the floor and states “I’m saving you for last!”. Smith charges Frohman first, blade in hand, and yells out a roar. Just as Smith is about to strike the power flips back on, startling Smith from the brightness, and James is now standing in front of Frohman. James punches Smith multiple times and then kicks him to the ground repeatedly. Ransom appears out of his bedroom, wondering what is going on, and rushes to Smiths disarmed blade. The others stand around, not even surprised this time, and Saladin mentions “We should have seen this coming”.

Ransom inspects the blade and exclaims, “Yes, this is exactly what I’ve been looking for! How ironic!” and proceeds back into his room. James stands on top of the defeated Smith and Frohman calls the police. Youdied, Quack, and Saladin discuss what they just endured while Frohman is on the phone. The storm settles and the police eventually arrive. Ransom escorts James outside and commands James to hide and he acknowledges him and hops away hiding in the cover of darkness. The police enter the house and haul Smith away. Smith mutters “We will meet again…” as he is being carried away. The police get statements from everyone and they show the cops the pee jar room with Smiths dead ex wife and gather evidence. While the police scour the house, the group heads into the backyard mentally exhausted. Youdied brings out the bottle of scotch and pours everyone a glass. They all talk about what to do now in the aftermath and take sips from their glasses. Ransom announces “pf is truly dead” and heads back inside. The others remain outside and look up into the night sky. They take in a moment of silence and have a look of disbelief upon themselves afterwards, considering the situation. Frohman states “we should have named the kangaroo Master Chief” and goes back inside. Quack checks his smartphone as he gets a phone call from a friend in Canada and he takes the call and it goes back inside politely. Saladin examines the bottle of scotch and claims: “only what a mad man would drink right?” as he finishes his glass and goes back inside. Youdied lights up a smoke and paces around the back patio, he pulls his smartphone out and logs into pf. As he logs in he notices a new message in his inbox and examines it, it is from Mr. Smith. Confused, he opens the message and witnesses a picture of two murdered police officers with a note from Smith reading “this isn’t over!” Youdied drops his glass and it shatters as the screen fades out.

yeah some of it is cliche but I think it represents the forum properly. we're all zany and over the top. was going to take a more dramatic/serious route and make it a rather depressing story about loss but after watching Smith Blog videos again this is how I could imagine Smith being like haha. I like the misery loves company thing better but at times it does get a little too silly. Any comments are appreciated! I can always go back and edit, this isn't set in stone just an idea is all.

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Re: pf - the movie

Post by Mr. Smith » Mon Oct 06, 2014 03:54

I always knew Saladin was an asshole. He'll be the first to go.
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Post by Quack » Mon Oct 06, 2014 04:46

I fucking died at the eggs on pizza. I remember that thread omg
I was smiling the whole time reading it, it's funny to be a part of a story. Also there's something charming about us all meeting together and reconciling and shit. Very nice to entertain that thought
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Post by Gordon Frohman » Mon Oct 06, 2014 13:57

Fucking 5 star post. Lost my shit at dismembered blow up dolls.
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Post by Lord Rameon » Mon Oct 06, 2014 18:44

Dear god

What mistake I have done by coming here

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Post by youdiedtooeasily » Mon Oct 06, 2014 19:23

holy shit I lold Ramen.

thanks for the input so far guys.

as a request, I have a some questions for y'all if you don't mind answering.

what worked for you in the story? what didn't work? if you could make five changes to the synopsis what would they be and why?

the input really helps and stirs up some new ideas for me. thanks in advance!

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Post by Lord Rameon » Mon Oct 06, 2014 20:22

I lol'd lots of times. I didn't need to be here for years to get the personalities of everyone and it seems like you did a magnificent job of representing that.

It did seem 98% smith and 2% everyone else. I know stories typically revolve around one character with many secondary characters, but this is to show each member, so maybe have scenes that focus on the others (such as frohmans halo boner) that makes them so uniquely fucked up almost as much as Smith is ;-)




With that said, I read the whole thing and it kept my full attention, so that makes it a damn good story. Am waiting for the sequel!

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Post by youdiedtooeasily » Mon Oct 06, 2014 20:35

thanks man, you have a good point about going more in depth with the supporting characters. it does feel like Smith steals the spotlight most of the time and Frohman never really got a proper dramatic moment as opposed to everyone else, apart from his exchanges with Smith.

initially I had to choose three main focuses and went with Youdied, Quack, and Smith as the main characters and had Frohman and Saladin be secondary ones. Ransom is included but more or less appears when it is convenient to the conflict or action for dramatic or comedic effect.

if I was to seriously write this out in screenplay format I would have to convey a lot of our back story since no one else would get it really and that's the tricky part. I'm all on board to do it though don't get me wrong.

glad you liked it, and yes, a sequel can definitely happen haha.

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Post by Saladin » Mon Oct 06, 2014 22:27

I found some of this strangely plausible. :P

I liked it, I think it would be cool if you wrote it out as an actual screenplay. Although I think that it lacks a central drama for a movie. It feels more like a tv show, with the big reveal at the end of the season.
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Post by Quack » Tue Oct 07, 2014 00:57

I summon Ransom to animate this in Flash
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Post by youdiedtooeasily » Tue Oct 07, 2014 02:37

haha yeah Saladin after I starting combining all the shit I free wrote into actual plot lines I was kinda creepily like "this could actually happen..." in the back of my head.

you have a fair point though. in the beginning I was thinking of a mini series to include more members but it would still be hard to give everyone their own unique character and would feel too crowded in a sense. I will have to take that into consideration. I have a few ideas to add a few more people in for a sequel though but it would have to make narrative sense and not forced.

and yeah Quack that would be funny, he has my permission to do so.

and GFro, sorry you didn't cum. I hate the feeling (from the other thread) so in retrospect what do you think your impressive moment of an ending should be? to be fair I could add in a standout scene for you since it seems everyone else got one but you didn't. I'm sorry!

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Post by Gordon Frohman » Tue Oct 07, 2014 03:34

I-It's okay... I still love you. :'(
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Post by youdiedtooeasily » Tue Oct 07, 2014 03:39

oh, that makes sense. so as Smith is being dragged away by the police, Frohman kneels before Smith and professes his love to him, stating he still loves him despite threatening his life. Smith gets aroused by his kind words and gives Frohman a wink before exiting the house. Frohman wipes tears of of his face and states "there goes the only man I have ever loved..." Quack goes over to Frohman and hugs him.

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Post by youdiedtooeasily » Sun Jan 25, 2015 20:34

hello again.

well, since I got the finger from a TV pilot contest I was working on, due to not having rights to write about a Breaking Bad spin-off, I was like well shit. forgot about the whole "having rights to properties" thing, derp.

anyways, I am now a member of the Writers Guild of America and got a more inside view of how the industry really works. I am putting the short film path at a halt since it's basically just practice and will be working on a full length feature film. figured I already have a treatment posted right here on pf so I'm going to attempt to turn pf - the movie into an actual screenplay. I'm also looking for a writing partner with the WGA to attempt a mini-series but that I'm not too concerned about at the moment. so yes, pf - the movie will be my first attempt at a feature length film.

with that being said, I'll have to change it to a fictional forum website and title it something else. I do plan on copyrighting it when I'm done so just want to be clear, not gonna use anyone's real name but I do intend to keep the net-handles the same unless you guys don't want me to. I plan on the characters calling each other by their screen-names at times in dialogue. Like using G-Fro, Frohman, Saladin, Sally, Saladman, Quack, Ducks, Smith, Smitty, as examples. Ransom will just be Ransom and the kangaroo will be James.

anyways, just finished out the opening scene, poor Vinny getting heartbroken and lighting the fuse which will set the journey in motion haha! deciding if I will take a more serious route with it or keep the zaniness is a struggle but maybe I can pull off both. we'll see.

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Post by Quack » Sun Jan 25, 2015 23:56

Use Quack as my name, ducks = sucks
also this is exciting :O
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