I decided to make a thread for feedback and discussion of my script ideas. Hope you're enjoying VoP so far. I'm at page 65 of VoP now and will come back and edit this initial post many times to keep you guys up to date. Ironically I'm almost halfway done with RoN but I plan on scrapping a lot of pages during this entire process so the trilogy ties together nicely in a tight bow. I think I'll finish VoP sooner than expected and make changes accordingly along the way.
I wanted to share my mapped out plans of the other two scripts for friendly debating purposes.
I know I still have to finish Vault of Pellios of course but here are the other two films in the trilogy I plan on writing that I've blueprinted in advance. (all of this is subject to change, just my current thoughts)
The second entry is currently titled Tower of Twilight.
Marlow (he will be introduced in VoP but will be a main role in this one)
Aurelia Shade (psychotic "Magi")
Xen'galil (a lich)
Side Good Guys:
Luthias Daefir (Veslarian military commander)
Bari (dwarven King of the desolate mining town)
Side Bad Guys:
(both roles tbd)
Faith of Shadows (devil worshiping, witch-like cult)
Tower of Twilight (duh)
Shards of the Nether
SIRATH! (he plays a huge role in the story)
A discovery of an ancient magical ore is found in a small dwarven mining town. Zariel, Annabel and Marlow are sought out to investigate it. This sparks the attention of Aurelia Shade as they clash to obtain the forbidden ore for opposite ideals. A hidden cult reveals a dark secret behind the magical properties of the ore which leads our heroes and villains to a grand adventure to uncover an ancient secret long forgotten by the realm.
The third, and last, entry is currently titled Realm of Nexas.
Drela (new character that will be introduced)
Nexas (entity that plays a huge role in the story)
Thali (pale-skinned elf priestess)
Nazaru (human male that is her advisor but has a secret)
Side Good Guys:
Annabel (she plays a big role but ultimately doesn't embark on the final quest)
Marlow (same as Annabel)
King Herrod (King of the city of Wyeford where most of the story takes place)
Malia (new minor character but she has an important role in the first act)
Side Bad Guys:
none at this point. I want to heavily focus on the conflict between Thali and Nazaru in this one.
none in this one, Thali commands an army of pale-skinned elves who are brainwashed into becoming evil by Nazaru.
Nexas' alternate plane of reality.
none per se, just the portal between Zariel's world and Nexas' realm of existence.
Zariel "dies" but Nexas is able to revive him at a cost due to certain magical circumstances.
An enigmatic portal leading to an alternate dimension is summoned outside the gates of the grand city of Wyeford. Zariel, in a state of desolation, is convinced to retake his mantle and uncover the mystification behind this event. He learns to discover an ancient scared oath has been broken and he strives to uncover the mystery behind an ancient entity known as Nexas and its reappearance after hundreds of years of being absent from the realm.
Things I want to have happen that I'm up in the air about: (potential spoilers since I'm still working on VoP)
I want Liliyana to play a major role somehow in the story.
I'm debating on what to do with Safford, I kind of want him to survive VoP and make a return in RoN.
more to come, I honestly need to get ready for bed for work atm.